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Lilly, had done the unthinkable. She had snuck out the house. When she got back home, she quietly, opened, the door, and began to sneak up stairs when. "Where do you think you're going?"  Her mother asked, sitting on the couch. "Oh mom, your awake", Lilly said nervously. "Yeah, I`m awake, and you know you're in trouble" Her mom said. "But it was The party, everyone was going you can get mad at me for that" Lilly whined. "You know you are not allowed out past midnight, you also know the punishment," her mother said sternly.  Lilly didn`t just know the punishment, she hated the punishment. It was probably the only thing that would keep her from sneaking out again. "No mom please don`t punish me I won`t do it again," Lilly begged. "You should have thought of that, before you snuck out" her mom said. She then picked up Lilly, and began to carry her up stairs. Lilly, began to squirm, and wiggle. "No Let me go"! She demanded. "I`m sorry, I`m sorry" she yelled. her mother ignored all of Lilly`s pleas. She then gave Lilly`s armpit one long sniff.   "Theheheeheee quit it." Lilly giggled. "You're getting a bath after punishment, you stink! Her mom said irritated,   as they entered Lilly`s room. She then tossed Lilly, on the bed and changed her to it. You guessed it , the punishment is tickling. "MOOOOOOOM NO!" Lilly begged. "You know the deal, you are to be tickled for 10 minutes, as punishment" her mom said. The she tickled Lilly`s armpits "GAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHA NHAHAHAHAHAAHAAH EHEHEHEHEEHEHE.", Lilly wiggled as much as she could, she squirmed, the feeling was horrible, she could not stop laughing as her mother tickled her armpits. "coochi coochi coo", her mother sang. DON`T SAYHAAHAHAHAHAHHAH THAAHAHAHHAHAHAHA! Oh that dreadful saying just made it worse. Her mother then blew raspberry under her little armpit, causing her to laugh, and squirm uncontrollably . "STHHAHAAHAHAHAHAAH IMAMAMAMAMAAAAAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHA SORRYHEHEHEHEHEEHEHE AHHAAHAHAHHAHA! Pffft pffft pffffttttt, her mother blew. NO, NO STHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHA PLEHEHEHEHEEHEHE ICHAAHAHAHAHAHA TAKE ANY MORHAHAHAHAHAAHAHHAHAA. "But Lilly, if you can`t take this, then why did you sneak out", her mother said Mockingly. "Alright now time for that tummy" of yours her mother said. Read part two soon, leave comments
the title says it all!
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Mightymidgetem Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
Cute :)
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MoonslicerXD Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Liily need to be taught that lesson.
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jakiture Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
yes indeed lol
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Serventalin Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
Now that is what I call a well deserved punishment. Serves her right for sneaking out. Great work by the way. You're a good writer.
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adamlambertlover01 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
I would die if I got tickled for even 5 minutes I'm exetremely ticklish
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jakiture Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
THANK YOUUUUU!
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Serventalin Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
No problem. Sorry, I forgot to favourite this story. 10 minutes is a long time to be tickled for btw. Lol.
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jakiture Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
lol, well thats waht she gest for sneaking out. :)
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Serventalin Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
Yeah, I suppose you're right.
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